WIPjoy #10

10. Describe your MC with a phrase for each of the 5 senses.

Nerissa’s skin is smooth, but her attitude is rough around the edges. Marc Jacobs’ Daisy wafts from the swing of her hair. Her tongue—her very voice—is the cracking of a whip. “I wish I could tan,” she says, “but I’m so pale, I practically glow at night.” Her words tend to be bitter, but at the core she’s sweet.

2 thoughts on “WIPjoy #10

    1. Thanks, Ken! I’m actually scheduled to go give a talk at the elementary school about using senses to heighten writing, so this was good practice.

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